Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A section of people believe that physical strength is more important to achieve in a success. While several people concern that mental strength is the most vital. In my opinion, both of that either physical or mental strength are pivotal for reaching a success. This essay will explain both of topics with relevant example to buttress my stand.
To start with, mental strength is very crucial aspect in sport because it builds bravery to people to do extreme activity moreover, leading them to be independent. People who have a good mental tend to try new or extreme activity. For example, rock climbing sport. Those who have a good mental even though they are scared inside they are going to push their self to master up courage to do that. Instead, those who is not confident or mentally weak, they will be pushed down by their fair so they that do not have bravery for doing anything that is extreme.
The other hand, I think although mental strength leads many people to get more confidence as well as courage to play any sports, all of that will be useless without a good physic. How many people who have mental strength but they can only sit or fall asleep on the bad because a physical disability also hoping can play together with their family, friends but is limited by the physic. Mostly people maintain their physic such as doing exercise furthermore diet so that their body is health but I never see people keep the mental and how to do that. This explains that the physical strength is the most crucial.
To sum up, either mental strength or physical strength is really important in exercise. One builds or gives confidence in oneself while physically strong enable people do any exercise though it is not extreme.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...more important to achieve in a success. While several people concern that mental stre...
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...ery for doing anything that is extreme. The other hand, I think although mental ...
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... physical strength is the most crucial. To sum up, either mental strength or phy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, really, so, well, while, for example, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71947194719 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30829716325 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514851485149 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0319623647 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385262683988 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152608370212 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10002846687 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264699778497 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100280287738 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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