Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The idea of working from home is a debate the first side of which advises that doing so brings benefits to the employees and their families. However, the second side insists it makes stress on them. While the former seems to be more logical, both points of view will be discussed as follows.
Those who support the notion of home working cite that this situation could reduce transportation costs. Thanks to employees do not have to go to the work office every day of the month. Thus, some money remains from their salary. Workers can spend their extra money on their families. Hence, the financial problems of their life slightly decrease and more benefits will happen in their living condition.
On the other side of this debate, proponents of the perception of working from the home claim that home workers could detract their focus from any tasks of the job. Because employees have a lot of communication with each other. In the long run, staying in the home and working could lessen the connection between colleagues. Therefore, the plans of their teamwork may be disrupted and there will be inconsistencies in the final result. The supporters say, this, could make stress in them. Accordingly, in the end, it is possible for workers that lose their job.
In conclusion, with respect to the controversy over whether working from home brings plus points or it will make stress at home. The letter seems to be debunked. It may endanger the health of the worker and his or her family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their focus from any tasks of the job. Because employees have a lot of communication w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80544747082 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48177050664 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9292846409 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6470588235 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324422670238 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921017890838 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624279796491 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206641647114 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149175167241 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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