Some people think that the main benefit of greater international cooperation is the environment of protection. However, others believe that the main benefit is the world of business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is indisputable that the international trades prompted by modern industrial civilization have seen economic prosperity in recent decades. Conversely, to others, cooperation between nations around the globe weighs more on environmental awareness. I would concur with the former on the grounds that its merits are more evident.
For one, the united effort from various organizations along with governments could alleviate environmental issues in a global context. As cooperation brings about opportunities to exchange viable solutions and perspectives from diverse visions of specialists and experts, more appropriate steps could be suggested and executed. For instance, through conferences with foreign environmentalists, Viet Nam has successfully prevented floods in the coastal areas thanks to their measures in reconstructing and upgrading the hydraulic systems to deal with the catastrophe. Consequently, ecological crises could be more effectively surmounted in comparison with individual endeavor to address the problems within a firm.
For another, in regards to the business domain, the extra increment in social economy could be boosted by international trades especially when overseas business development is facilitated by governments. Enterprises are able to penetrate new markets and even potentially dominate the competition in some particular regions through brand awareness. Not only the sales market could be expanded but also the job market is. Consequently, the competition for rewarding vacancies could be less fierce had the offshore investment in manufacturing for lower labor cost is growing resulting in more jobs are engendered. Both of which will bolster the overall national economic growth.
To conclude, it is clear that both views have some certain validity, I would concede that international cooperation gives rise to the economic sector rather than the environment protection solely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02919708029 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28337362841 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656934306569 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1709312406 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.076923077 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929888066933 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331293667902 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535167890855 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075933837013 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758648685433 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.69 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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