Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, due to the pandemic situation, students started using distance learning to not to go anywhere. There are a considerable number of individuals who think that it is better for children to stay at home. Nevertheless, not everybody believe so.
In my humble opinion, offline lessons are much more effective than online ones. According to psychology, information is remembered simpler when a person sees a teacher in real life. This way of communicating is also more convenient than any others. If at least one pupil has problems with the Internet connection, the online conference will not work correctly and the lesson will be ruined. Besides, one more reason why I do not support distance studying is health issues. The vision is getting lower when a user watches the screen more than one hour per day. Two years ago my vision was brilliant and I could see practically everything. Now I need to wear lenses or glasses because everyday since the year 2020 I have more than two online classes and It, unfortunately, affected my eyes. What is more, a child will not develop the social skills, if one always stays at home. This kind of skills is truly significant. Normal people know how to communicate with others as they did it with their peers and teachers at school.
However, there is an assumption that children should to be at home due to the safety. When a youngster is at home, parents are not nervous as their child does not need to be controlled and they know that everything is fine. Besides, there is no difficulties to buy a good working Wi-Fi router and a computer or laptop for the distance learning.
To sum up, there are two different sights. Though, everyone delays as they see fit. Both kinds of studying are always actual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 683, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... need to wear lenses or glasses because everyday since the year 2020 I have more than tw...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no difficulties'?
Suggestion: there are no difficulties
... know that everything is fine. Besides, there is no difficulties to buy a good working Wi-Fi router and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, nevertheless, so, at least, kind of, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77887788779 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69176260928 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8952430291 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164737450988 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440565391098 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607141763773 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105614569958 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661721851829 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.