It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it a good or bad development?
Indubitably, electronic shopping has become a popular among general public. As every coin has two sides, there are pros and cons with such kind of ongoing trend of teleshopping. The following essay will discuss that why people prefer to buy products online which have gained popularity as well as the positive and negative of this development.
The prime reasons made the e-commerce business popular in society will discuss briefly. To begin with, some of the shopaholics do not like to shop outside in the commercial markets because they intent to stay inside their house. By staying inside the house, they can shop online with the help of internet. Secondly, online shopping can be done anytime and anywhere from around the world but only if people will access to global network which is easily available in the modern world. Thirdly, e-commerce websites like Amazon, Flipkart provide shoppers to explore multiple options with different price ranges and brands to consumers whereas commercial stores have limited options available with them. Finally, teleshopping companies have provided the cash on delivery services to their customers. In other words, customers need not to worry about giving their banking details such as credit card on shopping websites portal. Therefore, the above all reasons justifies the latest following fashion of online shopping among individuals.
With this kind of development, there are two prominent benefits to shop online instead of going to markets for buying products. Chiefly, the reduction of traffic congestion on roads and overcrowding in shopping malls. Additionally, it has provided the tremendous choices of list of products on e-commerce apps because it is a big boon with the help of technological world. However, sometimes quality of the product was compromised because shoppers buying their desired items from e-commerce platforms are not being delivered exactly same as mentioned online. But this problem too has been solved by e-commerce online portals by providing feedback options, returning policy options on each and every product that is listed on their websites.
To conclude, in my opinion, the rising demand for shopping on internet is not only good but the better development of the society.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nic shopping has become a popular among general public. As every coin has two sides, there are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ty will discuss briefly. To begin with, some of the shopaholics do not like to shop outside...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
...ers. In other words, customers need not to worry about giving their banking details such...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, whereas, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38700564972 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67699003643 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1850411249 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.176470588 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13285260251 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476969809248 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530744547154 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10597864725 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625058172986 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nic shopping has become a popular among general public. As every coin has two sides, there are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ty will discuss briefly. To begin with, some of the shopaholics do not like to shop outside...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 831, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
...ers. In other words, customers need not to worry about giving their banking details such...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, whereas, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38700564972 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67699003643 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1850411249 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.176470588 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13285260251 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476969809248 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530744547154 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10597864725 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625058172986 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.