• Many people often take the salary into account the most crucially when choosing an occupation. To a certain extent, I agree that income has a vitally partial effect on people’s lives; however, I also believe that it is not in the end but has more aspects deciding considerably to their careers.
• It can not be denied that money plays an essential role in professors. Firstly, money stands for the qualification of any employer. It means that if the total annual income of a person is quite high compared with low-paid workers, there will be no doubt about how well-qualified and productive he is, the level of salary appreciates either their capacity or endeavor. Thus, some hiring managers take it for granted to recruit suitable oppositions in an attractive way. Obviously, almost all people, when having an intention for applying for a company, firstly see how much they can earn per month.
• Another reason for it is that salary can make families happier and help them to stimulate standard living much better. Throughout the industrial era, the monthly payment of labor contributes to domestic finance, when meeting the need for comfort, fashion is more significant than food needs. No matter how tired or snowed under with work, both parents and young ages always make an effort to earn for livelihood, give fullness, convenience, and personal requirements to their lovers.
• On other hand, the income of a job might be necessary, but it is not all. Being passionate about what people do or the characteristic of tasks is under consideration if they opt for jobs. In terms of emotional jobs, major saplings prefer to pursue a career that they feel is appropriate and they love it. According to the famous American news, as being interviewed about what the purposes they choose their jobs, three of quarter young workers said that it was their childhood hobbies, it liked the fire never went out, the job was actually proper with their positive energy. It is true that when people have an opportunity to follow a job, it is more felicitous than anything since they always try their best to fulfill it, but is not the reluctant and monotonous emotion. Life is truly meaningful when people can do what they like.
• Nevertheless, the characteristic of work can make a difference to people’s choices. They tend to choose labor whose environment is not too drastic. As a result, many ones would rather be white-collar now that it is not drudgery, do not have to use much manual labor as long as they still have full salary regularly. Besides, there is a relation between it and people’s behaviors. For example, someone who is scared of blood never wants to become a doctor, those who hate animals certainly are not veterinarians. Thus, everybody is likely to select occupations provided that it has a beneficial environment for their development careers in the future.
• In summary, the salary is really momentous not yet it can be a key for the people’s decision to opt for jobs. It also depends on their favorites, hobby, conditional work, and other things. People should consider those elements carefully so as not to regret having chosen in the wrong way.
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- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an attractive way" with adverb for "attractive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...granted to recruit suitable oppositions in an attractive way. Obviously, almost all people, when hav...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...see how much they can earn per month. • Another reason for it is that salary can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, still, thus, well, for example, in summary, no doubt, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2662.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 541.0 315.596192385 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92051756007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74608226595 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 176.041082164 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54898336414 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.345363607 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.48 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.64 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.48 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152296564034 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411632077621 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511509897713 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813725999388 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070001755359 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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