Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
-say why you would like to go on the trip.
-suggest what you could do to help during the trip.
-ask details about the trip.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to seek your approval on the three-day school trip with children because you are looking for parents to go with the schoolchildren group. And, I will be happy to be part of this small vacation.
Since last year my wife was planning to go to our hometown in India, and after hearing about the school trip news, I was extremely happy to get an opportunity for a vacation. Plus, it would be great to go along with the schoolchildren as more people more fun.
Besides, I am an Indian, and I know my country from inch by inch as I am a traveler since I was a teenager. I know famous places to visit in India along with the art, culture, and best places to eat. I could take children to well-known historical states in India, and will be a best tour guide for them.
If you allow me and my wife to come onto this small vacation, I would like to know more details such as the dates, timings of departure and return from the Airport along with the holiday expense.
I am hoping to seek your approval on this request, If me and my wife are the right candidates for children to go onto this three-day school trip.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tunity for a vacation. Plus, it would be great to go along with the schoolchildre...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...historical states in India, and will be a best tour guide for them. If you all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44343891403 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49145876176 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52036199095 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9056836965 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249037412329 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094526087162 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100156066985 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14487392852 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086657909639 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.