In this contemporary society, it is believed that society would be beneficial from a forbidden on all types of advertising because it is not only useless but also can deteriorate. From my point of view, I partly agree with this statement followed with some explanations.
On the one hand, there are many negative aspects that advertising brings to society. The first drawback is that people feel uncomfortable since advertisements are disturbing and annoying. For instance, when they watch their favorite TV programs or some interesting videos on YouTube, some promotional videos insert into the content and cause discomfort to viewers. Furthermore, there are some advertisement including violent and abusive content will negatively affect children's cognitive ability, they may imitate those actions at home with unpredictable consequences.
On the other hand, in spite of the above mentioned drawbacks, there are also some benefits that advertising has for society. Thanks to advertisement, the customers can be well-informed about new products. For example, when Apple launches their new iPhone 12 product, ads help users know more information about their new products. Therefore, they have more choices to make about their favorite commodity, leads to the sense of satisfaction when they purchase products. Furthermore, advertisements can generate more employment opportunities for people who work in advertising industry such as artists, painters and designers. They prepare logos, content as well as ideas. Hence, the companies will increase profit and create reputation.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that society may gain both possible benefits and negative sides because of the prevalence of advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'product' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'products'.
Suggestion: products
...when Apple launches their new iPhone 12 product, ads help users know more information a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, may, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78846153846 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19478819292 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0670927984 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15144489384 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518006084039 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642274142668 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102289674022 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696436398858 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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