In some countries, more and more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, there have been some changes in family structure; yet there still has a tendency that an increasing number of adults opt to live with their parents due to rising economic upheavals. Although this may bring several downsides for them, the returns are highly justifiable.
The first reason why residing with parents is rooted in the fact that young people could economize. Since the population is booming, especially in urban areas which appeal to young adults, an accommodation problem is problematic. For example, newly graduated students can save money on rent, utility bills, internet, security, and other expenses when they attend college. Therefore, if undergraduates or graduates have a desire to formulate plans such as a start-up, this way of living is sensible.
In addition, staying under one roof has other positive implications for family relationships. No one knows a person better than his or her parents. If young people are having trouble at work or in a relationship, they will be able to consult their parents and learn from reflecting on their experience. Besides, not having to learn to navigate a whole new setting frees a person up to do better things. Advice from families would help people more mature, thus ultimately forging stronger bonds between family members.
Nevertheless, the likelihood is that young adults will lack their privacy. Because of parents’ affection for their children, they are likely to intervene in their children’s lives. That may gradually create a psychological burden that makes people impose themselves on a certain framework.
In conclusion, notwithstanding having an inadequacy in private space, living at home with their family is still a positive development. True community is a rare and wonderful thing in life, and there is no guarantee to find another one as home.
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- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university What are the advantages and disadvantages of this tendency 84
- In some countries more and more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... guarantee to find another one as home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29491525424 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91747254978 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647457627119 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8180947611 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238156600735 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656368796701 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527441680666 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120485311992 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018109399494 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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