Some people say that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the fast-paced digital world, some individuals take the view that men have their more innate competitiveness than women. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this statement.
Firstly, due mainly to the conservative mindset of each family, men are thought to be more aggressive and intense. The women lack in the encouragement from the society so that is one of the roof reasons they hide their talent. To illustrate, in the Asian area, the men are considered to be of great significance as a bread-winner of their family. Every things associated with making ends meet is absolutely the responsibility of men. In lieu of that, women are likely to take over the care taking of their home, which makes no access for women to showcase their distinctive talents in the general public.
Secondly, there is plethora of circumstances that women are taken into account to have substantial competitiveness. The vast majority of head leader is women who accustomed to disrespect by all people in the past. With the well-thought-out character, the women have faculties to catch up every thing at a breakneck pace. The women is capable of being more successful than men because of the timely grasp to any gold opportunities. Nearly all the men have a tendency to give up when they have their crazy schedule with their job whereas women would prefer positively utilize the golden opportunities to turn over a new leaf rather than withdraw.
To sum up, the men being competitive than women are completely wrong because of some aforementioned reasons. From my point of view, the competiveness of both women and men is counting on the ambiance of their living rather than the inborn capacity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94014084507 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01938416206 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.547108726 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24380071917 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912260188447 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670477802739 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175790711074 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539908462837 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.