You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In this letter
explain your situation
Describe the problems with the house
say what you would like to happen
Dear Mr. Brhahm,
I am corresponding to let you know that you would kindly publish my application for the overcome of house rent mitigation.
Therefore, I am a Brazilian International student, at Quebec University in the United Kingdom under the microbiology department so I have agreed to a contract signed with you regarding the house rent criteria. Now, the sky price raising in the market situation includes tuition fees, living costs as well as housekeeping maintenance. I am unable to pay rent singly in this flat which supervision expense for example utility bills, monthly rent services charges.
If you would grant my application considering the current pandemic catastrophe, I will minimize all expenditure fees. Another alternative way, I absolutely savings my daily budget while my room sharing with junior students that assist from to let the opportunity every corner of the University guidelines. On the other hand, entire students from your apartment need to less daily basis essential bills at the end of the month.
I look forward to your feedback at your earliest convenience to mitigate our recent Mountain house fare.
Kind regards,
KH Boston
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Brhahm, I am corresponding to let you know that ...
^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in house fare. Kind regards, KH Boston
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, you know, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30107526882 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96984497716 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698924731183 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2318776585 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 4.34317383033 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253999050707 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834291666143 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621147506201 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139771601796 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617626574998 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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