Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individuals crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, there are various ways to jugde any crime whether anyone commits it accidentally or not. While some people argue that it may set to become to have a fixed punishment for several criminal, I side with those who believe that we should depend on the circumstances of each person who commit any crime.
On the one hand, There are many reason why need to have a fixed punishment for each type of crime. First, it allows criminals to be treated fairly and ensures that no one will be discriminated against. If the crime is more serious, prison is the most common punishment for any criminal. Another one is that these individuals often pose a threat to the whole society, so they should put in prison to ensure the safety of other citizens. To illustrate, some criminals who happen a case of murder and drug dealer always bring many threats for each society.
However, it is clear that we should consider the circumstances of anyone who commit the crime. The main one is that some criminal really don’t want to commit any crime, and they only do this activity by the accidental method. For instance, the self defense to murder someone can make the jury think about reduce the penalty of this criminal or innocent. Moreover, someone who have guilty often get a problem in their family, so the magistrate should know about the family circustance of anyone before judging any criminal. Take the bugarly as the particular example. The mainly reason why some individuals conduct this action is satisfied their basic needs.
To conclude, it is a great debate to talk about what kind of punishment should the jury conduct to any kind of criminal. However, I strongly believe that the jury will likely to think about many features of this person so that they can have an appropriate penalty for any lawbreaker.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75786163522 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48957519519 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7536951643 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335167779902 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109967144682 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822710143479 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208239634345 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835666342843 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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