Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons behind this.Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
It is beyond any doubt that every person on this globe in Harsh to attain a luxurious life. Even want to get married and have children after achieving their goals. In this essay I will elaborate the root causes for the scenario as well as its benefits that are dominating loopholes of this trend.
To commence with the factors responsible for this criteria, that having children and their well nurturing is a huge responsibility. Thus, today's youngsters want to provide each and everything to their children and for that they work hard and try to be well settled and financially strong to cater the needs of their young ones. This phenomenon tends them to have juveniles after a certain age.Apart from this, adults wants to live their life to the fullest irrespective of gender. Therefore, they do not want to duties and restrictions in their life and want to enjoy their adulthood. Moreover, statistics shows that there is gigantic rise in divorce rates. As a result, they think that a unsuccessful marriage will spoil the children's future and take decision to have children after healthy and strong relationship with their partners. Besides this, people are highly affected by celebrities approach and try to imitate them and avoid to have children in their early life.
The constructive impacts of this trend is that when a parent is mentally or physically prepare for a child then it will be prosperous for both. Furthermore, in this competitive epoch it is fruitful to have children later in life and being able to provide them everything they want. Consequently, parents will not suffer from mental trauma and depression and have a happy family.
The drawbacks cannot be ignored that parents turned old in raising of their child and sometimes are not able to meet the expectations of their wards which causes stress among both. Additionally, productivity of males and females curtail in their higher ages which prohibits conceiving in them and it is perilous for them.
To conclude from above confabulation it is axiomatic, that it is absolutely right to have children after accomplish everything to fulfill their child needs however too late can also be hazardous as some might not be able to have blessing of child in increasing ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99734042553 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73872513777 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526595744681 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4125742318 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267744085852 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10117478439 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631009996789 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144795422867 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778915498473 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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