The most ideal path for a society to set up its youngsters for positions of authority in government, industry or different fields is by imparting in them a feeling of collaboration, not rivalry.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The givens premise that the right path for a society to set up for the youth for different positions of authority in any field is by imaprting in them a feeling of collaboration not rivalry holds true and is the best way.To succeed in any filed in life team work and cooperation is very important thing.Youth are the valuable assets in todays world.It is very important to nurture and shape them so that they can take up any challenges of life.
A crucial quality that youngsters lack is experience. In any field once a student completes his education, they are unaware of the real world. With the advent of technology, it has become easier to communicate with people globally. If individual with similar aspirations and career goals collaborate they can benefit from each others experience and gain knowledge.Thus, students can use social media like LINKEDIN, which is essentially created to bring people together professionally, to expand their network and connect with individuals who are in a similar predicament and solve problems mutually. The government should encourage such collaborations.
Even though competition is important, a victory could not be achieved without cooperation.An individual is never isolated from the society, at some point everyone needs support and help.For example, when we elect a leader that is only possible when we all come together and vote for a person and the united results and same mindset help us elect our lead.The imporatance of cooperation applies in the field of politics.
Steve job serves as an important example in the field of business.Competition plays a key role in his life and he strives to achieve and make the best product possible.When designing an Apple Office, Job comes up with an idea that the office should have only one washroom.He wants the staff to interact ,share ideas and co-operate with others.
As one of the most successful leaders in the business world, the idea of Steve Jobs is not be forgotten by the younger generation. This shows that the importanc eof cooperation does not only serve in the field of politics or industry but applies to all other fiels too.
In conclusion, the furture of the young leaders should realize that cooepration is the most important than competition, if they want to suceed in any field life.The examples of Steve Jobs have well proved that nothing great can be achieved without cooperation and help from others. Achievements can be triggered by competition, but are only suceeded and completed through cooperation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d and completed through cooperation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19036144578 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99447015387 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568674698795 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.812860652 60.3974514979 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.5 118.986275619 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5833333333 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169184667365 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482913430844 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644518922692 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775076991012 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807132497117 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... rivalry holds true and is the best way.To succeed in any filed in life team work ...
^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Youth
...and cooperation is very important thing.Youth are the valuable assets in todays world...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...operation is very important thing.Youth are the valuable assets in todays world.It ...
^^^
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Suggestion: It
...are the valuable assets in todays world.It is very important to nurture and shape ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... can take up any challenges of life. A crucial quality that youngsters lack i...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...vent of technology, it has become easier to communicate with people globally. If ...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ch others experience and gain knowledge.Thus, students can use social media like LIN...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ould encourage such collaborations. Even though competition is important, a ...
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Suggestion: An
...uld not be achieved without cooperation.An individual is never isolated from the s...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: For
...e point everyone needs support and help.For example, when we elect a leader that is...
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Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...and same mindset help us elect our lead.The imporatance of cooperation applies in t...
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Line 11, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Competition
...ortant example in the field of business.Competition plays a key role in his life and he str...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: When
...ieve and make the best product possible.When designing an Apple Office, Job comes up...
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Line 11, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...he office should have only one washroom.He wants the staff to interact ,share idea...
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Line 11, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... washroom.He wants the staff to interact ,share ideas and co-operate with others. ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... but applies to all other fiels too. In conclusion, the furture of the young ...
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...f they want to suceed in any field life.The examples of Steve Jobs have well proved...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d and completed through cooperation.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19036144578 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99447015387 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568674698795 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.812860652 60.3974514979 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.5 118.986275619 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5833333333 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169184667365 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482913430844 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644518922692 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775076991012 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807132497117 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.