With the development of technology these days, more and more people chose home-learning or home-working instead of the traditional way, which is believed to occur due to the affordability and convenience of automation. This development not only brings significant chances to study overseas but also gives people initiative in time monitor to work effectively.
The advancement of technology has opened numerous methods to connect with other countries or religions overseas. Learning at home with internet support helps us approach international teachers, learners, and different educations. We not only make good relationships with people overseas but also has an enormous knowledge which we got from them. For example, joining zoom international classes give you chances to learn from other religions' methods and know a lot of interesting learners who share the same goals as you do.
Learning or working with others requires rules which you have to follow, nevertheless, working at home does not need your observance. You can choose to follow your ways and times as well. Moreover, you know always know the most accurate methods to develop yourself. Working at home gives you the initiative at the time for your best result. For example, a home-learner has decisions in choosing a suitable course with their ability, such as learning from Youtube videos, signing in the online lesson,...etc.
In conclusion, home-learning and working bring a countless number of benefits such as the chances to connect with multiple methods all over the world, choosing individual measures to improve the best,... These reasons have shown the positive of one of the most common technological results.
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime Do you agree or disagree 84
- Planting trees is important is very important for the environment Some people says trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns while others says housing facilities should be build instead Do you agree or disagree 61
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person in an Australian university 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ube videos, signing in the online lesson,...etc. In conclusion, home-learning and...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... individual measures to improve the best,... These reasons have shown the positive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42205323194 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01774211664 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9986112592 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24347956546 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837808789264 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510520742299 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152279480852 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538491581132 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.