A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Dear Aman,
I hope this letter finds you as fit and fine. I am going to give you an important responsibility as i am going overseas for business purpose and there is no anyone at home to take care of my tiny puppy and house. As you know that my all family members have been residing in other metropolitan city for a long time. So, being your bosom friend i trust on you as well as you understand my situation in a better way. I want you to look after my little pet dog as well as live at my home for a few days for its security. I am giving you my phone number that is 447766 and call me at any time when you have any difficulty.
I have gotten a small puppy a few days ago and it is not exposed to this new environment and still find everything strange. Therefore, i take it to the morning walk daily and provide meals at appropriate time intervals. I request you to provide him meals three times in a day and take it to walk in the garden. Also, he needs a good treatment and needs one more injection from doctor.
I hope you will take all these things in consideration.
Take care
Sarbjeet kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Aman, I hope this letter finds you as fit and ...
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Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...give you an important responsibility as i am going overseas for business purpose ...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... long time. So, being your bosom friend i trust on you as well as you understand ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... time when you have any difficulty. I have gotten a small puppy a few days ag...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ill find everything strange. Therefore, i take it to the morning walk daily and p...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time intervals. I request you to provide him meals three times in a day and take ...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sideration. Take care Sarbjeet kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, as for, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13888888889 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43916025375 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4129336151 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224748072808 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742354389773 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626049559566 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112954750983 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11379392056 0.0580467560999 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.