Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many administration think that budgetary round is their most important goal. However, think that other type of round are uniformly important for a homeland. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some argument in favor of economic progress is their most important is goal. First, economic progress aims to stimulate produces, release the power of produces, promote the positive aspects, and limit the negative aspects of the market mechanism. This progress economic support, presumably tends not only to increase society quality but also economic support for poor people. Second, budgetary round would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that having a good economic will better subsidize disadvantaged employees and boost human capital. Economic development can boost future technical skills.
Nevertheless, the resultant problems would be far more significant than the minor benefits once only focusing on developing the economy without caring about other types. First, focusing only on developing the economy causes other types to lose out compared to other countries. A country will try to develop in many areas, so without development in other areas, it is impossible to develop comprehensively. Second, only economic development will bring a lot of inconvenience when the pretty things are not taken care of, and people working in other fields will not get money and to their detriment. Instead, comprehensive development will be the best way for the country.
I was discussed both sides of cons and cons. In my opinion developing all areas is most appropriate. In the future, I hope countries will have a reasonable development way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun administration seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many administrations'.
Suggestion: Many administrations
Many administration think that budgetary round is their mos...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
Many administration think that budgetary round is their most impo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4219858156 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88289148717 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5540974651 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9411764706 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273121396482 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946634512412 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101078052503 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169894510786 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865713272193 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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