Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some human think advertisements comedy or uncomfortable and they are not effects by this when they shop. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before a conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some argument in favor of advertisements amusing or annoying they are not effects when they shop. First, advertisements are believed to support their products or make people focus their yield. This advertisements support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall shopping market but also to people know more about products market. Second, advertisements of company have many advertising amusing results in a greater supply of highly qualified customers, take care about their product, which benefits society the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that material and advertising to custom everywhere is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development any market.
Nevertheless, the resultant problem would be far more significant than the minor benefits once have many advertisements amusing or make people uncomfortable. First, a company or branch have advertising annoying would likely correspond a shopping market. Advertisement is a important thing in products to everyone, meaning that when have advertisements uncomfortable don’t attract many customers because the ads are not suitable for everyone. Would be less input other important areas such as the services system and numbers of customers obtained. Second, advertisements uncomfortable wouldn’t tempt many young people including those who are not shopping inclined or show no interest in shopping pursuits, thereby customers will never by something through advertising because advertising is what we give customers, without a good advertisements instead, it is an annoying advertisements that will be difficult to accept. It, instead, would be more advertising viable option if the resources were focused on supporting suitable ads.
In this above essay, I was discussed both views. In my perspective, I disagree with this argument of advertisements annoying people are not influenced.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...input other important areas such as the services system and numbers of customers obtaine...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advertisement'?
Suggestion: advertisement
... what we give customers, without a good advertisements instead, it is an annoying advertisemen...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advertisement'?
Suggestion: advertisement
...vertisements instead, it is an annoying advertisements that will be difficult to accept. It, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72990353698 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25149235285 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8971056417 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327685493796 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12493103393 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122640094531 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22515817049 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485904689105 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.