Dear Manoj,
It's been almost two years and we haven't seen each other. I hope you are doing well, and have been safe in the post-Covid world.
As you know, the pandemic of coronavirus has been ended and our lives went back to normal. But before that, we were staying in our homes due to government impose on travel restrictions due to the pandemic of coronavirus. Therefore, I am thinking to take a vacation to the Maldives in the coming month of November for the first week. And, you know I don't like solo traveling, so, I would request you to join me on this trip.
I know a person who is a professional worker in travel bookings for international tours. He has given me the brochure which has brief details of the trip to the Maldives which is especially for like us Bachelors. We both always wanted to do water sports, and this would be a best place to get our desire complete. Besides, we will get a good experience of mouthwatering dishes of seafood and other cuisines. The trip will be for one week and the budget of the trip will be around fifty thousand rupees including flights, hotel stay, and watersports. However, if we need to buy any antique items, that will cost separately on our trip.
We both wanted to experience beach life, and the Maldives will be the best place to experience it. Therefore, I invite you to come along on the trip. Plus, I have contacted our school friend Ravi who is also excited to come with us on our Bachelor's trip.
Looking forward to hearing a positive response from this letter.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58007117438 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55488256703 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2706885999 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118472830714 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412595811666 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519101072295 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727475866758 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499380529542 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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