You are unable to attend a farewell party of a colleague at work. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should:
-say why you can’t come
-give him/her your best wishes.
-suggest another time and place for you to meet.
Dear Rose,
Thank you for your extended invitation to the farewell party which you have booked on coming Friday.
Sadly, I'll not be able to attend the party because I have go to India to attend my sister's marriage. And, my presence is significantly important because I have to participate in certain marriage rituals which requires to be completed by a brother. I hope you understand the reason of my absence on coming Friday.
I'll miss working with you because you are not only an amazing team player but also a subject matter expertise in your specialization. I have learned a lot of technical stuff from you when we worked on a same project last year. My best are with you for your brighter future and new upcoming challenges in your new firm.
Nevertheless, we can meet later after I'll come back to Toronto. I want to give a farewell from myside, so, I'll take you to your favorite dine restaurant in the weekend after my return to Canada from India. I'll share the meetup details soon, once I'll book my return flight.
Hoping to see you soon after my holidays. Bye for now. Take care.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ave booked on coming Friday. Sadly, Ill not be able to attend the party because...
^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...able to attend the party because I have go to India to attend my sisters marriage....
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...son of my absence on coming Friday. Ill miss working with you because you are n...
^^^
Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... Nevertheless, we can meet later after Ill come back to Toronto. I want to give a ...
^^^
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ant to give a farewell from myside, so, Ill take you to your favorite dine restaura...
^^^
Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...d after my return to Canada from India. Ill share the meetup details soon, once Ill...
^^^
Line 9, column 247, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...Ill share the meetup details soon, once Ill book my return flight. Hoping to se...
^^^
Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke care. Yours faithfully, Shwatank
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71859296482 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57016386233 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.137308944 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2307692308 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294948852528 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104565419517 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841067943867 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181476956978 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959198970945 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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