You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
• state your reason for writing
• describe the problems and explain how you feel
• propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
Dear Mr. Shelby,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with your water heating system in your apartment which you have rented to me and my flatmates past six months during the summers.
From the beginning of my stay in your rental residence, the thermostat was non-functional and you have promised to fix it in a couple of next days. However, it is almost six months and winters have been started. Thus, we are facing a hard time using water due to the cold weather. Since the water is too cold in winters, we expected you to fix the problem with the thermostat. Apart from this, the problems I and my roommates are facing that we could not wash utensils and clothes with cold water due to its hardness. I feel terribly for the past few weeks in these winters without hot water. Besides, I got sicked to use cold water during daily household activities in the house.
Fortunately, I have found a new thermostat that comes at a nominal price, and it would be feasible for you to buy the item. I have enclosed the shop and model details of the machine with this letter. If you will not fix the problem as early as possible, not only all the tenants including me in your house will get sick and annoyed with your services but also they will take strict action against your hospitality. Therefore, I request you to please fix the problem and will be grateful to you for your quick resolution.
I am looking forward to seeing a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, apart from, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63235294118 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52761564136 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4176575721 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259852292473 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907043489462 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501833391982 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146320100874 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551648665871 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.