Being a celebrity , such as a famous film star or sports personality –brings problems as well as benefit. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems ?
Nowadays, one of the best way to have quickly famous is being a celebrity, so it is easy for them to get beneficial because of its. However, these individuals have to deal with many problems that happen often with them on everyday.
To begin with, there are many problem that household-name have to face with , and one of them is having not privacy times. Most action that they do everyday will attract the attendtion of every people because of their high reputation, which make them get annoyed on a particular level. For instance, Papparazi is the nearest individuals who often follow the privacy life of any celebrity in order to spoil on any media platform. The others problem is that these media platform often judge celebrities rely on these article about them, which means that other people misjudge about these individuals while read a news about any celebrity despite the proof of these information. For example, fakes news is the common problem that celebrity often face with and have to solve intermediately.
However, It is clear that celebrity can receive many positive aspect because of their reputation. Firstly, it is argue that celebrity usually receive the special treatment whenever they go, which make them the high benefit. For instance, the VNU university have recently created a course for a well-known Vietnamese athlete, called “ Sport business administration “, to create a job opportunity for them after they retired from their principal career. Moreover, it is clear that some household-name is famous for their true talent with their optimistic behaviour in any circumstances, which is the ideal lesson for anyone. Take Cristiano Ronaldo as a particular example. He is a true role model for anyone who want to become success although they don't come from as good a starting point as him.
To conclude, although celebrity can receive many things depend on their reputation, they often deal with manyproblem happening from day-to-day. Consequently, many people should accept the cons of being famous if they want to become a household-name or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'happen'.
Suggestion: often happen
...ls have to deal with many problems that happen often with them on everyday. To begin with, ...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...problems that happen often with them on everyday. To begin with, there are many problem...
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Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
... on everyday. To begin with, there are many problem that household-name have to face with ,...
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Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...veryday. To begin with, there are many problem that household-name have to face with ,...
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Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...em that household-name have to face with , and one of them is having not privacy t...
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Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...privacy times. Most action that they do everyday will attract the attendtion of every pe...
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Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...der to spoil on any media platform. The others problem is that these media platform of...
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Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...udge about these individuals while read a news about any celebrity despite the proof o...
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Line 2, column 657, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...bout any celebrity despite the proof of these information. For example, fakes news is the common ...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
...use of their reputation. Firstly, it is argue that celebrity usually receive the spec...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...a well-known Vietnamese athlete, called “ Sport business administration “, to cre...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
... called “ Sport business administration “, to create a job opportunity for them a...
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Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ho want to become success although they dont come from as good a starting point as h...
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Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...want to become a household-name or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12941176471 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79742955136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526470588235 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7095701297 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130916525001 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478771985273 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315177669883 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825076415436 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150079477949 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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