Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the phenomenon that adults have a tendency to have offspring later in their life. There are some reasons for this tendency, and it could have some impacts on family life as well as society.
A few causes can be given to justify the trend of delaying parenthood. Firstly, concentrating on occupation is the root cause of this phenomenon. In fact, parents want to develop their careers in order to have a higher standard of living.Take my parents as an example, they worked for about seven years so as to double their income before deciding to give birth to me. Secondly, children need to be raised with better education by older mothers and fathers. Indeed, when they get older, they are often more experienced, mature and responsible for raising children; therefore, life skills and social knowledge can be effectively taught.
The trend exerts both advantageous and disadvantageous influences on society and families. On the one hand, kids are likely to become a useful citizen to society in the future when their old parents can ensure a better life for them. In fact, children can have enough knowledge from many different fields in order to make their country or homeland more prosperous.On the other hand, family life is disturbed and disordered. This is because there are risks to women’s health in the period before and after childbirth or women can die after having children with a high possibility, and then family members do not control and solve it thoroughly, so the family life can be ruined.
To conclude, the tendency to postpone childbirth is caused by a number of factors, namely parents’ pursuit of their careers and the good foundations for children’s growth, and having children later can have both positive and negative effects on families and society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Take
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...children can have enough knowledge from many different fields in order to make their country o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is caused by a number of factors, namely parents’ pursuit of their careers and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73795536555 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.418417777 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332460988335 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113958243291 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866625658052 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215540884064 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680689351825 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Take
...der to have a higher standard of living.Take my parents as an example, they worked f...
^^^^
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...mple, they worked for about seven years so as to double their income before deciding to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...children can have enough knowledge from many different fields in order to make their country o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...eir country or homeland more prosperous.On the other hand, family life is disturbe...
^^
Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is caused by a number of factors, namely parents’ pursuit of their careers and th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73795536555 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.418417777 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332460988335 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113958243291 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866625658052 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215540884064 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680689351825 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.