Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
(Do you agree or disagree)
The development of technology, electronic devices, have been increasing since last two decades. By Overusing computers, juveniles will be exposed more destructive influences compared to the benefit ones. This arguments in definitely true. It has not only inevitable effects on the their physical health but also their mental health is under ambush. In this essay I will put the impacts on children who use these devices daily.
This is undeniable that making use of computers regularly has brought about various issues for children and their parents. Some health problems are caused by sedentary life style which means spending a lot of time sitting on the couch and surfing on the internet. To take it clear, people tend to using their mobile phone as well as laptop to do their routine job instead of doing them physically. For example, kinds are more interested in playing online games and surfing on the internet searching for irrelevant subjects rather than do exercises and studying touchable books. Consequently, this tendency to less physical activities will have quite a few effects. Heart attack as well as diabetes are the important disease. Kids who are looking at screen continually are usually suffering from headache and eyestrain as well as some people get spiral problems while sitting for a long time without any movements.
Due to the continues utilization of computers, children may get mental problems. As the children watching videos, playing games, chatting for many hours they will constantly addicted to their staff which are not easy to keep them away from for a couple of hours. Additionally, they get frustrated when they parents take them away.
As a result, addition prevents them doing their routine job properly. Apart from addiction, digitalization reduce social abilities since kinds are not motivated to connect to people in person. They would prefer virtual connection than real ones. To illustrate, instead of having entertainments with other kids, they choose to have friends through social media.
On the other hand, computers are one of the essential part of educating during studying process. By using in a wise way, it is possible to take the advantages as it broaden the horizons of knowledge since a surge information are available only by searching.for instance, taking appropriate courses and getting new skills.
In a nutshell, I believe computers plays a significant role in educating system, but there are always dangerous threats in overusing them which is much more than the benefits.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
.... It has not only inevitable effects on the their physical health but also their mental h...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...and surfing on the internet. To take it clear, people tend to using their mobile phon...
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Line 6, column 175, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'addict'
Suggestion: addict
...ing for many hours they will constantly addicted to their staff which are not easy to ke...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...tionally, they get frustrated when they parents take them away. As a result, addition ...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l ones. To illustrate, instead of having entertainments with other kids, they cho...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to have friends through social media. On the other hand, computers are one of ...
^^^
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wise way" with adverb for "wise"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ating during studying process. By using in a wise way, it is possible to take the advantages ...
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Line 11, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., but there are always dangerous threats in overusing them which is much more tha...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76052290187 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587223587224 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0225323467 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5454545455 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157230899722 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415752134993 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342857280479 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769700618785 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292543177118 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
.... It has not only inevitable effects on the their physical health but also their mental h...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...and surfing on the internet. To take it clear, people tend to using their mobile phon...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 175, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'addict'
Suggestion: addict
...ing for many hours they will constantly addicted to their staff which are not easy to ke...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...tionally, they get frustrated when they parents take them away. As a result, addition ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l ones. To illustrate, instead of having entertainments with other kids, they cho...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to have friends through social media. On the other hand, computers are one of ...
^^^
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wise way" with adverb for "wise"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ating during studying process. By using in a wise way, it is possible to take the advantages ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., but there are always dangerous threats in overusing them which is much more tha...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76052290187 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587223587224 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0225323467 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5454545455 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157230899722 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415752134993 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342857280479 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769700618785 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292543177118 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.