The pie charts below show the percentage of kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972and 2012
The following pie charts display the percentage of five sorts of books sold by book-seller for three decades since 1972.
Overall, for three decades, adult fiction was best-selling, although the percentage has got a huge increase in 2012. Biography was second least-sold, even though it has got a deep drop in 2012.
Starting in 1972, adult fiction, biography and children's fiction were stand together at the same percentage, a fifth. Per-time three of them have varied, adult fiction increased five percentage to become on quarter. After that, biography, that has dropped five percentage to become less than a fifth. Furthermore, children's fiction just increased two percentage to become just over a fifth.
In 2012, adult fiction has got the hugest increase to become forty-five percentage, and biography has got the deepest drop to become eight percentage, additionally, children's fiction just a little increase and become one quarter. 'Travel' started in 1972, less than fifth, after that in 1992 it has become eighteen percentage, in addition that, in 2012, it just become on in ten. Jumping to 'Others', initially, in 1972, one quarter, secondly, in 1992, dropped to fifth, thirdly, in 2012, dropped again to just over on in ten.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23618090452 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74076266859 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477386934673 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3047278682 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127243627175 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666347178167 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702219706586 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117155961164 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887751984594 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.