Some people think that the poor children will be the successful people more easily than rich ones because of the many difficulties that they face. To what extent do u agree or disagree.
Several people believe that the humble beginning can be reached to the success in their life more than the wealthy people due to the number of difficulties that they face. I firmly believe that wealthy people will be successful. And this essay will combat the induces for my views as flow
To begin with, there is a number of reasons why wealthy people regularly will be successful. It is because of the rich people who have a good situation more than poor people. Look at their properties which they have, is very large and then these things can assist them in promoting their life. As the prime example, when someone in their home needs to look for an occupation. Their rich people can be based on their position or relationship which can enhance their life easily. Generally, wealthy people always have a big opportunity to be awarded their career.
Meanwhile, It is factual that poor people have much fewer opportunities to succeed. This is because this life will be prevented them from being successful. Especially, But for their life did not afford their daily fees, the poor people would not have a relationship to rely on. For instance, according to find a work that is intricate to look for if they do not have a wide relationship. Almost, these poor people should attempt to go over their difficult life.
In brief poor people will be easy to succeed more than rich people. From my point of view, I think it does not depend on their step to face to be awarded their career, the position whether the people was born rich or poor. That is crucial more than these situations which people must face.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in brief, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67253521127 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42280900434 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1458269778 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324850283523 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139641832273 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916102071965 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247035306215 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715821783349 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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