Worker often have to retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working for as long as they want. What is your opinion about this?
There has been a collosal upsurge in discussing whether or not the senior whose age over 60 continually participate in the labor force if they want. This social phenomenon bring both pros and cons to the society. Personally, I believe that the elderly can partake in the labor force if they still have enough criteria that the company requires.
On the one hand, I agree that it is absurd to compel the healthy senior to leave their job and retire while they can continually devote their contribution the communication. The old can pursue their career as long as they want if they meet the requirement about physical and mental condition of a company. To be clear, the senior have more experiences and knowledges when compared with the young, which can help the company save the time for training new staff. Moreover, some countries have the vocation for old-aged people such as Japan is hard to find the young to shift the position of the senior employee which have long-time experience in the short time. It is irrefutable that pension and subsidiaries from government to the senior in some developing countries are not enough for them to get by the living expense on the daily basic and become the economic burden of the family. Even more, after retirement, some seniors become more lonesome because they don't have any children or daughters to take care of them. That's the reason why the old can pursue their job career as if they have enough required criteria in workforce.
On the other hand, some people veto about the senior's ability to continue working due to many reasons. Firstly, the physical and mental health of the old are not standardized as it used to be, which can make them hard to remember and complete the assigned task quickly. Secondly, the overpopulation force the senior retire as quick as possible in order to the young generation can substitute their position and lead the business. Thirdly, it is hardly unaccepted that the elderly rarely keep up with the youngsters' tendency and trend because of the fast paced life. Finally, the social dogma assume that the senior need to be relaxed and receive the worth pension after a long time they contribute to the development of a society instead of continue participating in workforce.
In conclusion, it is clear that the job can be continually assigned to the senior let alone they want to get it and reach the requirement of the company. I, wholeheartedly, opine that the senior can deal with their workload as long as they wish to have it and meet the required working condition.
- The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use 78
- The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 68
- The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 84
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion 78
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...s been a collosal upsurge in discussing whether or not the senior whose age over 60 continuall...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 963, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...niors become more lonesome because they dont have any children or daughters to take ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1021, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...dren or daughters to take care of them. Thats the reason why the old can pursue their...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'seniors'' or 'senior's'?
Suggestion: seniors'; senior's
... other hand, some people veto about the seniors ability to continue working due to many...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...hat the elderly rarely keep up with the youngsters tendency and trend because of the fast ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82727272727 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62955232968 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486363636364 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4139716509 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.941176471 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8823529412 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259991869597 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911525311001 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531786462495 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171370665831 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286346413024 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...s been a collosal upsurge in discussing whether or not the senior whose age over 60 continuall...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 963, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...niors become more lonesome because they dont have any children or daughters to take ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1021, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...dren or daughters to take care of them. Thats the reason why the old can pursue their...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'seniors'' or 'senior's'?
Suggestion: seniors'; senior's
... other hand, some people veto about the seniors ability to continue working due to many...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...hat the elderly rarely keep up with the youngsters tendency and trend because of the fast ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82727272727 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62955232968 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486363636364 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4139716509 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.941176471 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8823529412 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259991869597 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911525311001 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531786462495 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171370665831 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286346413024 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.