The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about Australian citizens’ coffee and tea using manners from five different cities.
Overall, it is noticeable to see that people coming to a coffee shop for tea or coffee made up the greatest percentage. On the contrary, individuals bought fresh coffee least.
In Sydney, the share of purchasing fresh coffee accounted for almost 45%, nearly equal to three-fourths of going to a café with over 60%. While in Melbourne, the proportion of having coffee or tea at a coffee shop was 65%, one-and-a-half as much as buying fresh coffee with 43%. In the rest, the figure for coming to a coffee shop was substantially higher than that of buying fresh coffee.
In almost all five Australian cities analyzed, people were interested in buying instant coffee right after going to a café to have one. In detail, in four cities namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart, the percentage of having instant coffee constituted around half of the population, with 45%, 49%, 53%, and 54% respectively. However, Adelaide’s citizens preferred having instant coffee, with 50%, to buying fresh coffee and going to a café, with 34% and 49% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ight after going to a café to have one. In detail, in four cities namely Sydney, M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16230366492 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8475130138 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9072880253 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191600434142 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950790834777 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661542272083 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14169139923 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544148438434 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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