Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The world is run day by day under the affection of legislations and regulations. The school of thought hold that organization of society will be ruined if people are allowed to do anything they want. In my point of view, I almost go along with this opinion.
On the one hand, rules and laws have laid the foundation for development of civilization until this point of time. People are called primate because our awareness have grown considerably. These canons have been taking form and expanding along with growth of society. Without them, people just similar to every animal else. Moreover, if there are not laws, acts of moral destruction such as murder, robber, kidnapping will become stretch out, this is unacceptable. Besides, ethic rules lead people to live with general standard so that social order is formed, including one thing is extremely vital that people know how to love each other. This is also a point that human beings are more evolved than animals.
On the other hand, legislations and regulations sometimes curb people’s creativeness. For instant, their are some experiments or new techniques banned to conduct at home and plenty steps taken to be allowed to carry out creator’s project. Therefore, bringing them discouraged feeling and a large number of them gave up on it.
In conclusion, laws and rules hardly tie people’s life and make them feel difficult. But they are also crucial and indispensable because they are the basis of society and develop parallel with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...urb people’s creativeness. For instant, their are some experiments or new techniques ...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
..., bringing them discouraged feeling and a large number of them gave up on it. In conclusion, la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04016064257 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72426544813 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3248533217 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091689733049 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287101122496 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500295253985 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661440100814 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521236445017 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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