Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Discrimination is the widely observed issue among young ages in the majority of academic facilities, such as primary school, high school even universities. However, various factors are contributing bullying in a different way, some measures can be taken to tackle these problem.
Possibly the main cause is the family background, which is ranging from demand of basic needs that useful for children daily life to is disciplined as a growing teenager or adolescent. Lack of attention from their parents and overwhelming stress without relative ones burden on those who attempt to be fully growth person. Also, it can lead to unstable mental development especially during their puberty, thus they tend to be disruptive and aggressive attitude on other weaker peers. Another well-known cause is amount of free time students had it excessively rather than academic. If they had much more time to learn, obviously young people would followed right path and thinking properly, in spite of youngsters are neglected by their collegues. Fortunately, it is seemed there are some remedies which help to reduce such actions.
Turning to the possible solution, those whoever responsible for children need to communicate with their offspring and give an better attention for them to overcome stress and depression. Furthermore, school authorities should focus on subjects which include psychology and social communication on the curriculum. And, the academy should strengthen rules of regulate bullying at school, such as penalize or require to do a social work, those who bullied others. By we mean that investment they put into young generation`s all-round education will even indirectly be paid back in later life.
Overall, however, plenty of causes can be considered to negative action through the school area, similar amount of remedies can be seen as healer for that serious activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'follow'
Suggestion: follow
... to learn, obviously young people would followed right path and thinking properly, in sp...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
... at school, such as penalize or require to do a social work, those who bullied others...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43537414966 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89981895548 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670068027211 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1242004976 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127337416643 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410600042887 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287113608289 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789842456137 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134837132555 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.