Write about the following topic. Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In terms of COVID-19, people are more aware of the necessity of owning accommodation. Many people hold the belief that accurate architectural design is more vital than any factor, while the opposite opinions are completely agreed by the rest. In this essay, both views as now will be discussed.
Initially, as noticeable in the external appearance, careful construction designs always take a long time. This is due to the fact of quality and satisfaction. A high-quality house not only needs a prominent ideal to become appealing and comfortable but also is edited to have optimized space. In other words, old expensive houses are easily purchased because of their ancient and unique architecture and solidity as it is made of high-standard materials. That is why accommodation blueprints are worth spending time on.
On the other hand, despite many advantages that are summarized, it is still not an ideal choice for low-income occupants who need quicker and more reasonable ones. As the need for affordable housing is more and more increase due to there are numerous people who want to live a stable life since the sooner owning house the fewer concerns they are. Using illustration, buying reasonable ones, occupants do not have to be in dept or on installments and still can go to expense for magnificent furniture which can boost their motivation and fulfillment. Hence, it is more crucial to provide cheaper and quicker accommodations.
In conclusion, each type of accommodation has its beneficial and adverse points. I believe that long-lasting accommodation is more suitable for people who have high wages while the opposite is more reasonable for youngsters and low-income people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24632352941 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08809304644 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3952236966 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198927574305 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639175378189 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384739847606 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118146604879 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195981369517 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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