May peole believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree. What other factors can contribute to a good career.
Education is extremely pivotol in every person life, in the present era it is difficult to survive without it. After completing secondary education most of the pupils say University cources are important for a good career. I completely agree with this statement along with there are few other factors which help to contribute towards a good career, I will discuss my view points in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, in school classes students only get a particular knowledge about their field but at University level they learn in a depth related to streams. In colleges good teachers and study of only one field directly increase knowledge of a person by which they effortlessly get a satisfactory job. To cite an epitome, jobs such as account, teacher, engineer require University certificates to apply for a job in big companies. Therefore University education is necessary in the new millennium.
Besides this, work experience and honestly also play a important role for a good career. To elaborate, if person is not aware about how to perform work then it is hard to do activity. Information about particular field easily help to set up own business at any where. For example, work like mechanics, electricians and many more in these jobs it only require physical work experience not university education with this individual open their own shops and earn lot of profit.
In conclusion, in the modern era, education is getting first priority without it no one can survive. So that is why university education as well as other factors both are necessary for a good career.
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- Many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career Do you agree or disagree What other factors can contribute to a good career 73
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- May peole believe that a university education is necessary for a good career Do you agree or disagree What other factors can contribute to a good career 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, honestly, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03802281369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85114823344 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9507092753 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318295535814 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117733923066 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118021743481 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21002175963 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999674161745 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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