Nowadays, it is not only large companies that are able to make films as digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is not only large companies that are able to make films as digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Although digital technology development has many drawbacks, I believe it will have more positive points.
There are good grounds for arguing that digital technology development has had many drawbacks. One of these is that the content of the movie will be of poor quality. Because people who are new to filmmaking will not know how to build a plot intelligently. This leads to viewers not understanding the main content of the film. Added to this is that the film's content will not be carefully checked before it is released to the audience. Movies that are terrible bullshit or smear an object here are an example. Filmmakers will post movies on apps like youtube, tiktok ,and that will influence the viewers.
On the other hand, / However, This development is also positive in other ways. One of these is the variety of movie genres for viewers. Movies lately have repetitive and boring content. Thanks to the support of technology, individuals have produced many quality products for the public. Added to this is that the Creative outlet is greatly improved. From there, it is possible to find a natural talent for the field of movies.
In conclusion, although there may be some minor drawbacks of this development, they are far outweighed by the benefits that it brings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9914893617 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67848565546 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578723404255 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0263945017 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3125 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256338143888 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808507141031 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13684871788 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173878298573 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182749422701 0.056905535591 321% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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