Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In this modern-day life, people have a variety of choices. It leads to that people gain more oppoturnities to get a better life. To my point of view, I substantially agree with this outlook.
Individuals easily approach and gain choices in light of some reasons. Firstly, thanks to the enhancement of technology, upgraded gadgets appear and satisfy inhabitants’ needs and preference. To be more specific, people are in dire need of leisure activiites and entertainment, by these softwares; therefore, they can read e-news on the Internet, watch TV programs, and the like effortlessly. Secondly, there are a host of services which facilitate citizens’ daily life. There is no denying that telecommunication, transport vehicles and so on emerge and take a pivotal role in life. For instance, most individuals lean towards shopping online because of saving time, their shopping items bought will be transferred to their houses by shippers. Ordinary citizens also can go to a new place thanks to transport vehicles such as motorbikes, buses, cars.
On the other hand, people can broaden their horizon in terms of different matters. There is the majority of materials, information and resources on virtual environment, or books at libraries. This is the precusor to that students are accessible to study and gain knowledge. Moreover, aldults who are both men and women have autonomy in choosing their favorite jobs. To explain this, in the past, in the eyes of ordinary citizens, men had to work hard and earned salaries in a position as a breadwinner, women stayed at home and take care of their family. Nonetheless, people equally opt their jobs and most individuals must change their school of thought about the contribution of women for finance and economy nowadays.
To sum up, I subscribe to that we have many prospects to seize initiatives in these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...ike effortlessly. Secondly, there are a host of services which facilitate citizens’ ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15841584158 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02722491178 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620462046205 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1151190977 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136582534056 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441945596048 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496774895181 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991988716983 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569356233537 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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