Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is argued that celebrating an international sports event is beneficial to the host country, while others believe that it is deleterious. In my opinion, I believe this is bad for hosting an international sports event.
On the one hand, there are some virtues in this argument. Firstly, people's health is improved and promoted, especially the young. They look into the athletes like their heroes and want to be strong and flexible like them. The athletes will be taken as a model. Secondly, the economy of the host country is developed. For example, a country that hosts the Olympics will see a significant increase in the number of tourists coming. It takes a crucial factor to attract the tourists and also advertise their country.
On the other hand, some disadvantages will be stated here. First, the residents will feel uncomfortable when many people come and break the silence. Because of the noise, they can be easily distracted when they try to do something. Second, a worldwide sports event usually costs a million or trillion dollars. As a result, the authorities will waste a lot of money on it. With that money, it is more helpful when to spend on hospitals and education to improve the life of the population. Last but not least, more and more trash will be released into the environment and make them worse. For example, more plastic will be used and many trees will be cut down to pave the wave for building new places for tourists.
In conclusion, there are many opinions about hosting an international sports event. However, I believe that a country that celebrates a worldwide sports event will have more drawbacks than advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91459074733 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72647570801 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9834807953 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6842105263 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241338294294 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782581110401 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861868182721 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176379546416 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832162203995 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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