Tourism is causing environmental problem all around the world. What is the main cause? what is the soulution?
Many people believe that the tourism sector contributes to environmental issues by increasing the amount of disposable waste in certain areas. However, this problem could be tackled by educating tourists about ecological laws.
The rise of disposable waste volume in tourism areas is the primary reason for the emerging environmental issues, causing the ecosystem imbalance. The wastes left by the high volume of tourists cannot be degraded quickly, affecting the life of organisms around. For instance, a study conducted by Green Peace Indonesia in 2019 stated that more than 100 sea turtles were found dead on Kuta Beach in less than six months due to being toxified by plastic waste coming from the beach. At the same time, the volume of tourists’ disposal waste at Kuta beach also jumped by 20% annually. Hence, the rise of traveler numbers in Kuta contributed to the death of sea turtles in 2019, given the increase of plastic waste found around the shores.
However, raising the tourists' awareness about environmental regulations is the best possible solution to tackle the ecological issue in the tourism sector. As they become more aware of the impacts their littering action would be their loss, they are prone to pay attention to it when being at tourist sites. For example, ever since the Orchid Forest management team charged high fines to visitors who litter the sites in 2019, the volume of disposable waste found decreased significantly by more than 70% in a year. Hence, charging fines prevents environmental issues from happening.
In conclusion, educating people about the law is the best possible solution to decrease waste disposal and solve the environmental problems in tourism. This can be started by using campaigns in the media to raise awareness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...und the shores. However, raising the tourists awareness about environmental regulatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68695264308 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1482764223 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100656977888 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429051674681 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458296425608 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693763536972 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170244315906 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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