Several researchers think that they can judge a child's future by analyzing its behavior to see whether they will become criminals or not. However, I believe that the future cannot be decided in the early stage of a juvenile's mind because it requires the upbringing of their parents as well as the education taught by tutors in schools.
Evidently, at some age, we can predict that a child could become a criminal from the behavior and nature. To begin with, the children's innate characteristics from their parents have a significant role in the future. For instance, children will behave as per observing the actions performed by their parents in daily life.
Fortunately, a child could easily be nurtured better if a guardian looks after them carefully in every manner. In other words, a small child is a lump of clay that could be easily molded in any environment even with having negative nature by birth. And, if a small young juvenile gets positive attention from their parents, tutors, and elders, he or she will achieve success in the future. Finally, parents should not scold every time to their children if they make small mischief because it will cause a negative effect on an adolescent's mind which could force him or her to be involved in criminal activities in the future.
To conclude, although a child's behavior and nature may predict its future according to the scientist's beliefs, I think that the nurturing by parents as well as tutoring by moral values decides the role of children in their future because they can be easily mounted with proper guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, may, so, well, for instance, i think, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90671641791 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5900871528 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4364366361 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218390219506 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903673426148 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480375704343 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144177393444 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191712351928 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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