5) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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5) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

I disagreed that there is nothing young people can teach older people. The person in each stage of his life he will learn something new , even from young people , they can teach us several things ,i think they are so important to teach us manythings for three reasons :

First, when the life becomes modern and everything start to change we need help even from young people. I remembered my grandfather he was older than me but i'm always teach him , how he can use his smart phone , the computer ,because there is advancement in tecnology and he had never hear of some new staff. He was always appreciate what i'm doing for him.

Second: there are many older persons who don't learn the writing and reading so they need help may be from youngest so they will learn from them. My neigbors didn't learn how to write or read, she asked her son to teach her ,so he will teach her although he is younger than him.

Third : many people moved from thier country and lived in different one ,and sent their kids to the school of the new country. The kids there will learn a lot of new things who thier parents don't know it and the kids will transfer these new informations to their parents. When i moved with my son from my country to germany ,i wasn't know their language.i sent my son to the school and i was at home for a year without work , every day when my son came back from the school he teach me new word and i kept learn from him alot of things.

So there are a lot of things that is important we can learn it from the young people it 's not depend on the age it is depend on many different things.

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Sentence: First, when the life becomes modern and everything start to change we need help even from young people.
Description: The fragment everything start to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace start with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular

but i'm always teach him
but i always teach him

he had never hear of some new staff
he had never heard of some new staff

learn a lot of new things who thier parents don't know it
learn a lot of new things that their parents don't know

he teach me new word
he teaches me new word

a lot of things that is important
a lot of things that are important

Sentence: So there are a lot of things that is important we can learn it from the young people it 's not depend on the age it is depend on many different things.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and depend

Sentence: The person in each stage of his life he will learn something new , even from young people , they can teach us several things ,i think they are so important to teach us manythings for three reasons :
Error: manythings Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: I remembered my grandfather he was older than me but i'm always teach him , how he can use his smart phone , the computer ,because there is advancement in tecnology and he had never hear of some new staff.
Error: tecnology Suggestion: technology

Sentence: Third : many people moved from thier country and lived in different one ,and sent their kids to the school of the new country.
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: The kids there will learn a lot of new things who thier parents don't know it and the kids will transfer these new informations to their parents.
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
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No. of Different Words: 145 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 310 350
No. of Characters: 1257 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.196 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.055 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.062 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.576 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.42 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.707 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.274 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5