In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In the pace of life, people hold conflicting views about whether to own a home or rent one. Some prefer having a private home rather than renting one in various countries. In my point of view, I strongly believe that the statement given illustrates a beneficial situation due to the fact that this can incentivize everyone to have a motivation’s life.
There are a number of benefits of owning a home for people in the modernized and urbanized era. Firstly, working parents seem to have less pressure on the burden of accommodations, therefore, they can put all their attention on other things such as children’s education, mental, and physical care…, thus this can lead them gradually settle down. In some countries, the authorities encourage families to have a house through numerous supporting policies by providing mortgage, home financing, and loan facilities. In addition, owning a home should bring more favorable economic aspects than renting a flat or accommodations in the long run. To illustrate, it is estimated a plethora of problems which are faced when renting an apartment as the cost of rent is increasingly unstable or the unsecured infrastructure.
The second advantage that should be taken into consideration is privacy. With ownership of the house, you will have a decision to design your apartment which is appropriate to your hobby as well as your Feng Shui elements. The most essential thing is that you can manage the security, and safety of the home yourself in your name by installing a number of protesting smart systems like cameras, and theft alarm systems. All of which can bring your family a comfortable and private life. Furthermore, Interacting with the neighbors surrounding your house is probably simple and friendly which will help you gradually become part of the residential community in the living area.
To sum up, Owning a home is said to be a vital achievement in everyone's life as it can bring numerous benefits to the economy, safety, and security as you get older compared to leasing one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05621301775 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97755012867 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0163704765 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223623341172 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793574638246 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637301962876 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140692378899 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703557170259 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.