More and more people work at home and study at home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
It is true that an increasing number of people work at home and take online courses at home with technological development such as computers. While there might be some drawbacks, I would argue that this phenomenon has far more benefits. On the one hand, this development seems detrimental firstly because working and studying at home might reduce people's performance. At my university, for example, most students who take part in online courses often lose concentration on study at home due to the lack of supervision. As a result, these students could receive a bad evaluation, and this may limit their job opportunities as well as career success in the long run.
In spite of the arguments above, I believe that benefits are more significant for the following reasons. The first advantage is that working and studying at home could bring many benefits to people's family. For instance, many adults who work and study at home tend to spend more time with their children. Hence, they could avoid the generation gap which is very common in modern society. Another benefit is that working and taking online courses at home are likely to reduce a wide range of costs for many people. To take most companies that run business in Vietnam as an example, they cut the rental fees of big offices and electricity bills. Hence, these people and business might have higher budgets to spend on other useful purposes.
In conclusion, although I recognize the possible negative effects of the discussed trend, it seems to me that it is a positive development overall
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93129770992 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6902089023 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8747554713 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41243420648 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139283590014 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127421838954 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248183186259 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103992280599 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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