Water shortages are causing serious problems all over the world. What do you think are the main causes of this situation?
In present time, water scarcity has become a globally pressing issue due to overpopulation and industrialization. This issue will aggravate unless appropriate measures are taken by national authorities and individuals.
To commence with, several compelling factors have led to the depletion of fresh water. One of the most radical reasons is the overpopulation in metropolitan cities along with global phenomenon of urbanization which results in the worldwide surge in water requirement directly attributed to water crisis in some populated countries. Furthermore, water contamination is another major problem. To cite an example, a recent article published in the Hindu newspaper highlighted that 60% of Industries in India do not have a proper waste management system and all of the industrial waste is dumped in the nearby rivers and lakes, which trigger the water crisis that the circulation of fresh water cannot be guaranteed. Additionally, fresh water from rivers and lakes has been increasingly used for manufacturing processes such as chemical reactions, cleaning toxic equipment and sent back to water resources accompanied with industrial waste.
To rectify the situation, national authorities can control this issue by implementing public education schemes regarding controlled water usage. Strict national legislations for preventing natural fresh water reserve pollution and compulsory sanitation before emptying industrial waste are also required. Moreover, government should also set up infrastructure for purification of seawater into salt free water, which will help in meeting the growing requirement of fresh water.
Similarly, individuals can also contribute towards this process by conserving water and also by limiting their daily household water usage. They should refrain themselves from performing activities that pollute natural fresh water reserves.
To conclude, even though, the scarcity of fresh water is a growing global problem, there are various methods available, by which both the government and individuals can prevent this from worsening.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als can prevent this from worsening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91721854305 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13885802769 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1379030467 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.461538462 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140232413215 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573780084932 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239303974553 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817007817904 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019898985645 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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