Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, a great deal of teenagers have sought more opportunities to gain work experiences. While some people believe those activities are worthless especially before starting the first academic years, the others consider them as enriching experiences. As I strictly agree with the latter view, I will analyze my point with examples.
Apparently, there are various advantages for pupils to take a year off before enrolling in university. First of all, this trend helps youngsters intellectually approach to new study techniques and fundamental skills, such as interpersonal or practical one. This time break may broaden each individual’s horizons with greater adaptability, thereby increasing their self-confidence and understanding. For example, young people will easily access to incredible new outlooks and customs by studying abroad. Then, those knowledges will significantly contribute to the development of the society.
Moreover, taking a gap year might create chances for adolescents to explore possible career options. Unfortunately, high-school graduates are not well-equipped with any specialized knowledge for their future career. However, with the relevant skills already collected, they soon take actions to select their certain areas of work. A recent survey showed two-thirds of employers search for graduates with pertinent work experiences. Therefore, most young people constantly prefer delaying tertiary education for one year to hone more necessary skills.
To summarize, there is no doubt that this period comes with enormous benefits. However, students should consider both sides of this trend to make the best decision.
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- Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university to travel or gain work experience Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university to travel or gain work experience Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...efore starting the first academic years, the others consider them as enriching ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91213389121 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11527561226 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719665271967 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9310159351 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153121765505 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482554383966 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284590592364 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820965376891 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316120634897 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.7 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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