Living in modernization and urbanization, people are bombarded with substantial problems belonging to the development of big cities. There are two major problematic issues that both individuals and the government need to simultaneously tackle
First of all, overpopulation is troublesome for nations to confront as a result of the rapid growth of major cities. This phenomenon is the culprit of unemployment and lack of housing. The influx of new inhabitants from surrounding areas has put a strain on authorities to generate adequate jobs or else the nations may waste a numerous workforce. Secondly, it is undeniable that the more people, the more environmental damage. New citizens have brought a large number of demands asking for more facilities, amenities, and infrastructure that the government has to utilize more natural resources to meet those requirements. This issue can lead to over-exploitation and do a great disservice to the surrounding environment.
As aforementioned repercussions, both individuals and authorities have to take those consequences into consideration and refer proper implications. First of all, youngsters should be well-versed with hands-on experience and offered more opportunities which the government can handle by investing more in domestic enterprises instead of the foreign. Thereby, a large number of employees can improve their lives as the cities flourish. Besides, the politicians should have more policies and legislation to protect the living areas from degradation as well as over-exploitation of non-renewable resources.
In conclusion, the urbanization and development of major cities have caused detrimental effects on both young citizens and our environment. It is beneficial that the government should take advantage of its resources to minimize the negative impacts on those subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...government need to simultaneously tackle First of all, overpopulation is troubles...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ental damage. New citizens have brought a large number of demands asking for more facilities, ame...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...prises instead of the foreign. Thereby, a large number of employees can improve their lives as th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78308823529 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56425622953 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2151244409 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132343578691 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434759961519 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528985120241 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812280408988 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029151681518 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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