The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married in one particular country in 1996 and 2008. Summarise the information and Write at least 150 words.
The charts illustrate how many people of different ages got married in a country in 1996 and 2008.
Overall, there was a slight decline in the percentage of men and women getting married under 30, while the converse trend was witnessed in those over 30. It is also important to note that women tended to marry at a younger age than men.
Regarding females, 1% of those aged 16 to 19 got married in 1996, but there were almost no women of this age wedding in 2008. Similarly, the figures for those falling in the 20-24 and 35-39 age groups decreased almost by half, from 6% to 3% and 4% to slightly over 2% respectively. By stark contrast, the share of women getting married from 30 to 34 increased slightly (from 7% to 8%), and the figures for 25-to-29-year-old and 40-to-44-year-old women remained unchanged.
In terms of males, it is clear that the percentage of those getting married at a later age all increased, with the figures for those aged 35 to 39 and 40 to 44 rising sharply (7% to 11% and 3% to nearly 6%), and that of those aged 30 to 34 growing moderately (9% to 11%). In addition, it is noticeable that the proportion of those from 20 to 24 remained unchanged, and there were no boys from 16 to 19 getting married in both years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, similarly, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43043478261 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69103742443 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6817881129 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156908271031 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954172286503 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981121957707 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139855246522 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10367636943 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.