The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in
Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5.
The line chart compares the information about the figure for commuters moving by
3 railway systems in Great Britain namely National rail network, London
Underground and Light rail & metro systems during the period 55 years from 1950
to 2004/5. Each unit is measured in million of travelers .
As can be seen from the graph , there was a upward trend in the number of
passengers railway journeys of 3 railway systems. In fact , in 1950 the number of
1000 million travelers used National rail network to move, but later it rose slightly
to about 1100 in the next 10 years and falling dramtically to over 600 in 1983.
When it comes to London Underground , the figure for under 750 was recorded in
1950 , then it fluctuated minimally between a high of 700 and a low of 500.
Interestingly , the number of passengers of National rail network and London
Underground were similar throughout the period from 1980 to 2004/5 and reached
the peak at under 1000 and approximately 1100 , respectively .
In contrast , the Light rail & metro systems hadnot been commonly used until 1990
, then it increased steadily to 60 and reaching at about 200 at the end of the period
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63864529249 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2660519424 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.571428571 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204094447822 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903691150846 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861819422432 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681041520497 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984122045623 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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