Traffic congestion is becoming increasingly problematic in major cities. What solutions can you suggest to help solve the problem?
In such a highly developed world, apart from unprecedented innovation, people still have to cope with some familiar problems such as pollution or deforestation. In terms of traffic congestion, this issue is universally becoming a common costume in big metropolitans. In these following paragraphs, I will evidently offer my opinion and solutions.
To begin with, it is undoubtedly that the higher enhancement people accomplish, the longer traffic jams exist. Indeed, with the mass development of major cities, the stopless rising population is the culprit of this unchanged phenomenon which requires some practical solution. Clearly, the authorities should renew their traffic laws to meet the demand for clear roads and fewer transportation which may probably ease this concerning problem. To exemplify, the transportation minister ought to enact new parking rules and increase the penalty in order to avoid the exacerbation of illegal parking in rush hours. Another thing to put into consideration is to utilize CCTV and traffic light management which may optimize the efficiency of the whole traffic system and mitigate the police works.
The significant rise of individual vehicles has contributed greatly to the long existence of traffic congestion which requires some functional and realistic solution to eventually sort the issue out. Therefore,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a common costume in big metropolitans. In these following paragraphs, I will evid...
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...ent of major cities, the stopless rising population is the culprit of this unchan...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ventually sort the issue out. Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, therefore, another thing, apart from, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65196078431 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09485363025 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7653574354 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.111111111 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134702377166 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482618875117 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283798523254 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084914946282 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136077861839 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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