Urban civilization has for sure improved the quality of life on a higher scale than any other previous eras. human is a social animal and the various aspects of human life includes its physical, emotional, social, technological, educational development.
In 'physical' or health related terms - modern world has definitely increased life expectancy and medical facilities. Continuous development in medical factors guarantee better cure to deadly diseases. Medicine and Doctors in this era are capable of handling life and death situations and this would only be increasing. Humans have also evolved 'emotionally' - the modern world where everyone is free to express themselves and every emotion is respected is a symbol of better life and growth. Awareness regarding topics of anxiety and depression and having an open mind towards them is a generational achievement.
The 'social' aspect of human society is also a lot more easier with governmental stability in majority of countries and democracy to ensure security of life and property. Not long ago was an era where voting was available only for men and that too of a specific social group. We have came a long way where everyone is treated as equal irrespective of caste, gender, religion, socio-economic background and people are free to embrace themselves the way they are. With human being a social animal this term displays the increased ease of social life.
Another improved aspect of todays world is the availability of education and most importantly 'available for all'. In ancient society of Indian culture education was limited only to upper-class social groups. Today education has emerged has the fourth fundamental right and with new facilities such as online material, education is available at tips of finger. One of greatest achievement of todays modern world is technological development. The aforementioned is in use in all of the above described angles of human life and is a significant contributor for easier life.
A relatable example would be submission of this GRE essay, where I could type my essay without risking it writing on a paper and losing it and the essay being graded by graders who might be situated on the opposite end of the world. Modern life is for sure a lot more easier than past, with all aspects of life being overall developed and moving towards betterment and improved life quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
...her scale than any other previous eras. human is a social animal and the various aspe...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...l aspect of human society is also a lot more easier with governmental stability in majority...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...too of a specific social group. We have came a long way where everyone is treated as...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th human being a social animal this term displays the increased ease of social li...
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Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
...ion is available at tips of finger. One of greatest achievement of todays modern world is t...
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Line 4, column 472, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...opment. The aforementioned is in use in all of the above described angles of human life an...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...he world. Modern life is for sure a lot more easier than past, with all aspects of life bei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16321243523 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89675472872 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551813471503 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2893665129 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.722222222 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332899732391 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105576342346 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136950583571 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187603507539 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653288504278 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.