Today more people are overweight than ever before. What is your opinion are the primary causes of this?
What are the main effects of this epidemic?
In recent years, we have seen a massive rise in the number of people being overweight. This essay will analyze the culprits and impact of this issue.
There are various reasons why today’s people are obese. Firstly, unhealthy eating habits lead to obesity. In other words, morden people eat large amounts of processed food including unhealthy ingredients such as sugar, sodium and fat. take fast food as an example. Fast food used as a main dish on a daily basis because of its popularity contains so many calories and cholesterol that it can cause obesity for those who eat too much. Secondly, a sedentary lifestyle results in being overweight. To be more precise, many lack physical activity as they are attracted to mobile phones rather than exercising. Thus, the excess calories are stored by the body as fat. it is, therefore, understandable why this issue occurs.
There are several impacts from this trend, and they all tend to be detrimental. To begin with, it is undoubted that obesity is associated with human health problems. To be more specific, being overweight increases the risk of other diseases and health problems such as heart disease, diabetes, high blood pressure, and certain cancers. Another impact that needs to mention is that overweight people suffer bullying from other people, which may affect their mental health. The negative stigma of being overweight may also affect self-esteem.
In conclusion, it is crystal clear that people are more and more obese because of bad eating habits and the lack of outdoor activities, and the considerable impact on health and mental life. It is imperative that individuals should follow a healthy eating plan and take regular exercise to maintain a healthy weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1161971831 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61415384728 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0919973772 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7222222222 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168670326643 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494211274032 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414371486556 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105278955164 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402697815983 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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