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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?
Sports play a major part of students' life. Scientist keep warning about the escalating trend of obesity rates at young ages. The importance of keeping students active and healthy throughout sport activities has demonstrated as part of the school curriculum. Hence, competitive sports, either on individual or team level, are questioned whether they should be included in school curriculum. Personally, I think that this kind of sports should be squeezed out of the school's program. This is why, for a good many reasons.
First and foremost, competitive sports raise the level of anxiety to studen...
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is pupils to balance the pressure they feel from subjects.
is for pupils to balance the pressure they feel from subjects.
Sentence: To conclude, taking as granted the increasing rates of bulling, as type of aggressive behaviour and the high rate of anxiety among students, competitive sports should squeezed out of the school curriculum.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to should and squeezed
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