Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concern on the closure of sports and leisure centre.
My name is John and I am the resident of the Harden enclave which is in the walking distance from the centre. However, my friends and I have quite complexed working schedule but we anyhow manage to take off time to spend amusing hours in centre. Besides, on weekends , we plan some special sports activities for families such as basketball, tug of war. Thus, it has become a second home to all the local residents as we can destress ourselves from the day-to-day mundane activities. Moreover, the vital role of it is that it brings all the families of our community closer. If the centre closes , life would not be pleasurable.
Firstly, it will adversely affect people's health as we are indulged into sedentary lifestyles. Next to it, social meetings and networks will be shrinked. Most importantly, children would have to go at distant places for playing as there is no ground within the five kilometres from our community. Kindly consider our envision and keep continuing the services of the centre. Thank you for your deliberation. I am looking for your response.
Yours sincerely,
John.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92156862745 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68996872771 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2523842127 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7142857143 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160084656454 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542214995054 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548344364653 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112358232701 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519621487108 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.